Once Jacqueline discovered her passion for writing she stared to dream that one says he will be a writer. Since she had a goal, she had something to look forward to. She could think about the future instead of her hard past of her relatives dying and leaving her house. On page 217, Woodson zooms in on a moment of her writing an introduction to herself. ""But as I bend over my composition notebook, only my name comes quickly. Each letter, nearly printed between the pale blue lines. Then white space and air and me wondering. How do I spell introduce? Trying again and again until there is nothing but pink bits of eraser and a hole now where a story should be. " I love this part of the story because it portrays how Jacqueline really cares about her writing. You can tell that Jacqyeline really feels a passionate way about writing.
On the last page of the book (320) Jacqueline writes how she wanted is/wants to become a writer when she grows up. I like how she added that because you can tell that she did since you are reading the book that she wrote when she is all grown up. It also concluded how Jacqueline grew up to have a good life and the perfection that she desired.
This is really good and I thought you really thought about the claim of the book and applied it to your reasons.
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ReplyDeleteThis is really good. I like how your claim isnt direct so people find it. I like the idea of never giving u on your dreams.
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